Some copy edits to the most recent release blog post. (#3275)

site/content/en/blog/releases/1.33.0.md

@@ -6,16 +6,13 @@ date: "2023-07-05"
 
 This is the 1.33.0 release of Agones.
 
-In this release, we have focused on improving the documentation, stabilized the SDKGracefulTermination feature and also are now returning GameServer annotations and labels on allocation response.
+In this release, we have focused on improving the documentation, stabilized the SDKGracefulTermination feature, and are now returning GameServer annotations and labels on allocation response.
 
-- Stable SDKGracefulTermination: 
-    SDKGracefulTermination feature is promoted to stable. With this advancement, the SDK server will now remain active for the specified `terminationGracePeriodSeconds` until `SDK.Shutdown()` has been called. This ensures a seamless transition during shutdown scenarios and gives you more control over the termination process.
+- The SDKGracefulTermination feature has been promoted to stable. The SDK server will now remain active for the specified `terminationGracePeriodSeconds` until `SDK.Shutdown()` has been called to ensure that game servers can successfully run to completion during automatic node upgrades without downtime.
 
-- Enhanced Documentation: 
-	We have taken steps to improve the usability of our [helm documentation](https://agones.dev/site/docs/installation/install-agones/helm/#configuration). The large configuration table has been restructured into multiple sections making it much easier to navigate the Agones services.
+- The [helm documentation](https://agones.dev/site/docs/installation/install-agones/helm/#configuration) has been restructured into multiple sections making it much easier to understand the configuration options and customize the Agones installation.
 
-- Returning GameServer labels and annotations to allocation response:
-	The GameServerAllocation now has a metadata field returned with the metadata of the allocated GameServer. This can be useful for returning information about the GameServer, Fleet or even the cluster to the allocating process.
+- GameServerAllocation now has a metadata field returned with the metadata of the allocated GameServer. This can be useful for returning information about the GameServer, Fleet or even the cluster to the allocating process.
 
 Check the <a href="https://github.com/googleforgames/agones/tree/release-1.33.0" data-proofer-ignore>README</a> for details on features, installation and usage.
 
@@ -59,4 +56,4 @@ Helm chart available with this release:
 - <a href="https://agones.dev/chart/stable/agones-1.33.0.tgz" data-proofer-ignore>
   <code>helm install agones agones/agones --version 1.33.0</code></a>
 
-> Make sure to add our stable helm repository using `helm repo add agones https://agones.dev/chart/stable`
+> Make sure to add our stable helm repository using `helm repo add agones https://agones.dev/chart/stable`