From 1fff181725dbe6b8894c6956cea1885fed4e9bb8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 10:40:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 1/7] adjustment #1 in messaging MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Feedback from the marketing seminar I’m taking. What is the value we’re providing with HospitalRun? Ease of use is more likely it. Open source is how we make it free. The platform idea is a phase 2 (or 3) thing. --- _includes/home/hero.html | 2 +- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 10 +++++----- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/hero.html b/_includes/home/hero.html index 598ac5a..d2ed49e 100644 --- a/_includes/home/hero.html +++ b/_includes/home/hero.html @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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Free, open source software for
developing world hospitals.

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Free, easy-to-use software for
developing world hospitals.

Try HospitalRun diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index 5e89384..caf5eff 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@

HospitalRun is an offline-first For the Developing World

HospitalRun is built to provide the most modern hospital information system possible to the least resourced environments through open source.

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Offline Enabled

HospitalRun is designed to allow records to be carried to remote clinics. It works when there is no Internet, and syncs when there is.

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Intuitive Interface

Saving Time

HospitalRun features are optimized for the one resource we can't make more of: people's time.

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More than a Download

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HospitalRun is more than a free piece of software. We're building an open source service focused on the needs of the developing world.

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Open Source

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HospitalRun is free and open source; [it always will be](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE).

From b79ee0ba09c043330a64f4190516c6df308619ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 11:34:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/7] and --- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index caf5eff..ff18059 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@

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Open Source

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HospitalRun is free and open source; [it always will be](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE).

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HospitalRun is free and open source; and [it always will be](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE).

From d4129a5024db4954f560b4404d20ade672935b59 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 11:36:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 3/7] more adjustments --- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index ff18059..29a4a6b 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@

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Open Source

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HospitalRun is free and open source; and [it always will be](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE).

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HospitalRun is free for download and use as well as [open source](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE), and it always will be.

From c4415ba13ed6e4331005503b2cdd067d230259c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 12:22:25 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 4/7] upgrading the json gem 1.8.3 was incompatible w/ ruby 2.4.1 --- Gemfile.lock | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Gemfile.lock b/Gemfile.lock index 126d010..3f0bec4 100644 --- a/Gemfile.lock +++ b/Gemfile.lock @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ GEM gemoji (~> 2.0) html-pipeline (~> 2.2) jekyll (>= 3.0) - json (1.8.3) + json (2.1.0) kramdown (1.10.0) liquid (3.0.6) listen (3.0.6) From e3f04615c96f7a598d8db63c57996b4fd7ed97cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 12:22:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 5/7] more language changes --- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index 29a4a6b..c2d5c99 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -35,12 +35,12 @@

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Open Source

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HospitalRun is free for download and use as well as [open source](https://github.com/HospitalRun/hospitalrun-frontend/blob/master/LICENSE), and it always will be.

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We encourage microindustry around the deployment and support of the system, but the IP is free and open source and always will be.

A Platform for Partnering

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HospitalRun wants to bring people from the NGO, government, and technology sectors together to solve a world-changing problem.

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We want the project to bring people from the NGO, government, and technology sectors together to solve a world-changing problem.

From 11d8897088c6522d1455a810b88907e3dd2a7244 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Sat, 20 May 2017 12:36:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 6/7] more language adjustments --- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index c2d5c99..b1c2ade 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@

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Open Source

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We encourage microindustry around the deployment and support of the system, but the IP is free and open source and always will be.

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The project encourage microindustry around the deployment of the system, but the code is free and open source and always will be.

From 7e0ed8639500c7053c52eab954053cea23e5ebd0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Joel Worrall Date: Sat, 20 May 2017 12:42:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 7/7] more adjustments --- _includes/home/product-summary.html | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/_includes/home/product-summary.html b/_includes/home/product-summary.html index b1c2ade..b2632b4 100644 --- a/_includes/home/product-summary.html +++ b/_includes/home/product-summary.html @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@

HospitalRun is an offline-first

For the Developing World

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HospitalRun is built to provide the most modern hospital information system possible to the least resourced environments through open source.

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HospitalRun is built to provide the most modern hospital information system possible to the least resourced environments. Read why.

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Offline Enabled

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Intuitive Interface

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HospitalRun is focused on great user experience for clinicians, admins, and even contributors.

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Intuitive

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HospitalRun is focused on great user experiences for clinicians, admins, and even contributors.

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Saving Time

Open Source

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The project encourage microindustry around the deployment of the system, but the code is free and open source and always will be.

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The project encourages microindustry around the deployment of the system, but the code is free and open source and always will be.